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I am here waiting patiently
I am here waiting alone
Only for you.
Inside my head is the
Perfect waiting room.
There are many doors
I am hoping for
One to open...
Waiting for a way to get
Myself from this isolation
And away from this
Misguiding confusion.

I'm sitting by the phong
Begging it to ring.
All I want to do is lay in
Your arms, and hear
Your heart beat sing.

It's so cold in this empty
Room.
I can't feel anything
Except for the pain
Coming from this
Gloom.
Your last words are
Echoing in my head
Shadows dancing
Across the ceiling
While I'm alone
In my bed.

I'm sitting by the phong
Begging it to ring.
All I want to do is lay in
Your arms, and hear
Your heart beat sing.

The distortion between
Our hearts has to be
Tearing us both apart..
An the tears that are in
My eyes are playing the
Perfect part.

(The night is taking over
Covering me in darkness
Is the night shattering you?)
©2004-2009 ~A-Poetic-Raven
:icona-poetic-raven:

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I don't know what to say...I just found this poem I wrote in ninth grade...So I figured I'd post it now. :D

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:icontenko72:
Ooh, that's pretty. I especially love the line "...Your hear beat sing".

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:iconsyphon3do:
Wow.... Great poem.. made me go ahhhh ooooo ahhhh :jawdrop: the poem fits the pic i like them both so much they good im gonna add to fav :+fav: :!:!:!:
:iconsyphon3do:
That poem is really nice, dont give that to a girl she cry in a instant :aww:
:iconfairlily:
nice poem, did you draw that pic???

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"Tskushi-chan says I'm cool!" -- Kazuya-kun, Hana Yori Dango

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:iconkandi-doll:
awsomely written poem :D

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"lying is the most fun a girl can have without taking her clothes off, but its more fun if you do" - natalie portman - closer
:iconnewbieboka:
:D Its really great :D +fav
:iconkittycatmeowmeowmeow:
I wont feel so sad if its not because I miss someone i love very much. sitting in a room thinking about someone you love is just too painful and too sad. :tears: such a touchy poem.
:iconstealyourface:
Wow, nicely written poem. I've experienced that before. My only criticism is that you misspelled phone
:iconazuredestruct:
This is extremely awesome, so perfect :)

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Ballad of Fallen Angels Chapter 2

This is forgiveness...so I know
I find trust in hate..

They wear white for me
Seemingly jaded and lost
I forge myself into your dreams

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